Professionalize the descriptions of the pieces of the GNOME

system. Monkey-bubble's description still makes no sense ::)


git-svn-id: svn://creme-brulee.marcuscom.com/ports/trunk@2203 df743ca5-7f9a-e211-a948-0013205c9059

6 files changed, 15 insertions, 19 deletions

diff --git a/accessibility/at-spi/pkg-descr b/accessibility/at-spi/pkg-descr
index 9a558afb5..c832f3ba9 100644
--- a/accessibility/at-spi/pkg-descr
+++ b/accessibility/at-spi/pkg-descr
@@ -1,4 +1,6 @@
-This is the Early Access Release of the Gnome Accessibility Project's
-Assistive Technology Service Provider Interface.
+This is the Gnome Accessibility Project's Assistive Technology
+Service Provider Interface.  It allows accessibility applications
+and assistive technologies to announce their respective existence
+to each other.
 
-WWW: http://www.gnome.org/
+WWW: http://developer.gnome.org/projects/gap/
diff --git a/accessibility/atk/pkg-descr b/accessibility/atk/pkg-descr
index b28d3e537..ac3b71815 100644
--- a/accessibility/atk/pkg-descr
+++ b/accessibility/atk/pkg-descr
@@ -1,12 +1,5 @@
-Accessibility means helping people with disabilities to participate in
-substantial life activities. That includes work, and the use of services,
-products, and information. GNOME includes libraries and a support framework
-that allow people with disabilities to utilize all of the functionality of the
-GNOME user environment.
-
-The GNOME Accessibility Toolkit (ATK) describes a set of interfaces that need
-to be implemented by GUI components to make them accessible. The interfaces are
-toolkit-independent-- implementations could be written for any widget set, such
-as GTK, Motif or Qt.
+The GNOME Accessibility Toolkit (ATK) contains accessibility widgets,
+just like GTK contains GUI element widgets.  However, ATK's widgets
+are platform-independent, so they can be used with Qt, Motif, etc.
 
 WWW: http://developer.gnome.org/projects/gap/
diff --git a/accessibility/dasher/pkg-descr b/accessibility/dasher/pkg-descr
index 70df2911e..7ef3255f0 100644
--- a/accessibility/dasher/pkg-descr
+++ b/accessibility/dasher/pkg-descr
@@ -9,6 +9,6 @@ system wherever a full-size keyboard cannot be used - for example,
     * when operating a computer with zero hands (i.e., by head-mouse or
     * by eyetracker).
 
-Dasher is fast, efficient, easy to learn, and fun to use.
+Dasher is fast, efficient, and easy to learn.
 
 WWW: http://www.inference.phy.cam.ac.uk/dasher/
diff --git a/accessibility/gail/pkg-descr b/accessibility/gail/pkg-descr
index e32431209..50541e527 100644
--- a/accessibility/gail/pkg-descr
+++ b/accessibility/gail/pkg-descr
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
-Gail, the Gnome Accessibility Implementation library, is implementation of the
-ATK interfaces for GTK+ widgets.
+Gail, the Gnome Accessibility Implementation library, contains
+the bindings to integrate the platform-independent ATK accessibility
+widgets into the Gtk structure.
 
-WWW: http://www.gnome.org/
+WWW: http://developer.gnome.org/projects/gap/
diff --git a/accessibility/gnopernicus/pkg-descr b/accessibility/gnopernicus/pkg-descr
index d522adfa7..1719c6588 100644
--- a/accessibility/gnopernicus/pkg-descr
+++ b/accessibility/gnopernicus/pkg-descr
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Gnopernicus  provides Assistive Technologies (AT) for blind and visually 
+Gnopernicus provides Assistive Technologies (AT) for blind and visually 
 impaired persons through modules for text-to-speech, braille, etc.
 
 WWW: http://www.baum.ro/gnopernicus.html
diff --git a/accessibility/gok/pkg-descr b/accessibility/gok/pkg-descr
index 1eb987453..1ef635d80 100644
--- a/accessibility/gok/pkg-descr
+++ b/accessibility/gok/pkg-descr
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-The GNOME On-Screen Keyboard (GOK) is an accessability interface
+The GNOME On-Screen Keyboard (GOK) is an accessibility interface
 that gives you control of your system without needing a keyboard.
 The GOK makes available a hierarchical button system that enables
 keyboardless entry of common accelerators, and contains a