proofing all over.

2000-07-25  Aaron Weber  <aaron@helixcode.com>

	* C/evolution-guide.sgml: proofing all over.

	* C/config-setupassist.sgml: Minor fixes.

	* C/fig/*  Replaced screenshots (Kevin's screenshots).

	* C/apx-fdl.sgml: Appendix C no more!

svn path=/trunk/; revision=4341

1 files changed, 73 insertions, 42 deletions

diff --git a/doc/C/config-setupassist.sgml b/doc/C/config-setupassist.sgml
index 519bd81414..6690c766ad 100644
--- a/doc/C/config-setupassist.sgml
+++ b/doc/C/config-setupassist.sgml
@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
-
     <chapter id="config-setupassist">
       <title>Easy Setup with the Setup Assistant</title>
       <para>
@@ -7,11 +6,7 @@
         operation. If you prefer more detailed or advanced
         configuration, see <xref linkend="config-prefs">
       </para>
-      <para>
-         This paragraph will describe all information required by the
-         setup assistant. It will include a long itemized list, and a
-         screenshot or two.
-      </para>
+
    <sect1 id="config-setupassist-mail">
       <title>Mail Setup</title>
       <para>
@@ -37,7 +32,7 @@
 	<title>Mail Setup Assistant</title>
 	<screenshot>
 	  <screeninfo>Evolution Main Window</screeninfo>
-	  <graphic fileref="fig/mail-druid-pic" format="png" srccredit="Aaron Weber">
+	  <graphic fileref="fig/mail-druid-pic" format="png" srccredit="Kevin Breit">
 	    </graphic>
 	</screenshot>
 	</figure>
@@ -46,73 +41,103 @@
 
 
   The assistant will ask you for the following information:
-        <itemizedlist>
-	  <listitem> <para> <guilabel>Name&mdash; </guilabel> Your
+        <variablelist>
+
+          <varlistentry>
+               <term> <guilabel>Name:</guilabel> </term>
+	  <listitem> <para>Your
             full name: eg. Eva Lucianne Tester </para></listitem>
+         </varlistentry>
 
-	  <listitem><para> <guilabel>Email address&mdash </guilabel>;
+       <varlistentry>
+          <term><guilabel>Email address:</guilabel></term>
+	  <listitem><para>
                  Your email address: eg. eltester@helixcode.com
                  </para></listitem>
+       </varlistentry>
 
+       <varlistentry>
+          <term> <guilabel>Organization:</guilabel></term>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>
-               <guilabel> Organization&mdash; </guilabel> Any
-              organization you represent.  Leave this blank if you
-              wish.
+              <guilabel>Organization:</guilabel> Any organization you
+              represent.  Leave this blank if you wish.
             </para>
 	  </listitem>
-
-	  <listitem><para> <guilabel>Signature File&mdash; </guilabel>
-             A text file appended to any email you send, typically
-             your name and email address, or a quotation you like.  It
-             should be three or fewer lines of text.</para></listitem>
-	  
+      </varlistentry>
+
+      <varlistentry>
+	 <term><guilabel>Signature File:</guilabel></term>
+          <listitem>
+            <para> 
+             A text file appended to any email you send.  A
+             signature file typically consists of your name and email
+             address, or a quotation you like.  It should be three or
+             fewer lines of text.</para>
+         </listitem>
+	      </varlistentry>
+
+     <varlistentry>
+           <term> <guilabel>Mail source type:</guilabel></term>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>
-              <guilabel>Mail source type&mdash; </guilabel>
-              <application>Evolution</application> supports two mail
-              sources: POP servers, the most common email server type,
-              and UNIX-style MBOX files.  Ask your system
+              <application>Evolution</application> supports three mail
+              sources: POP servers, the most common email server type;
+              IMAP, which stores mail remotely and allows access from
+              multiple locations, and UNIX-style
+              <filename>mbox</filename> files.  Ask your system
               administrator which one you use.
             </para>
 	  </listitem>
-	  
+	  </varlistentry>
+          
+       <varlistentry>
+          <term> <guilabel>Server:</guilabel></term>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>
-                <guilabel>Server&mdash; </guilabel> This should be the
-              name of your mail server, eg.
-              mailserver.organization.org
+              This should be the name of your mail server: it should
+              look something like: 
+              <userinput>mailserver.organization.org</userinput>.
             </para>
 	  </listitem>
-	
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>
-              <guilabel> Username&mdash; </guilabel>Usually, this is
+	</varlistentry>
+
+     <varlistentry>
+	  <term><guilabel>Username:</guilabel></term>
+	<listitem>
+             <para>
+              <guilabel>Username:</guilabel>Usually, this is
               the part of your email address before the @ character,
               and <application>Evolution</application> has selected
               that value as the default.  If you have a different
               username, you can enter it here.
             </para>
 	  </listitem>
-
-	  <listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+     
+       <varlistentry>
+            <term><guilabel>Authentication:</guilabel></term> 
+	    <listitem>
 	    <para>
-              <guilabel>Authentication&mdash; </guilabel> Select the
-              type of authentication you will use.  You can click
-              <guibutton>Detect supported types</guibutton> to find
-              out which authentication protocols your network allows.
+              Select the type of authentication you will use.  You can
+              click <guibutton>Detect supported types</guibutton> to
+              find out which authentication protocols your network
+              allows.
             </para>
 	  </listitem>
+       </varlistentry>
 
-
+      <varlistentry> 
+         <term><guilabel>Mail Transport:</guilabel></term>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>
-             <guilabel>Mail Transport&mdash; </guilabel> This is the
-              mail sending protocol you will want to use.  Sendmail is
-              the default.
+              This is the mail sending protocol you will want to use.
+              <application>Evolution</application> supports both SMTP
+              and <application>sendmail</application>.
             </para>
 	  </listitem>
-	</itemizedlist>
+      </varlistentry>
+     </variablelist>
       </para>
       <para>
         To learn how to configure <application>Evolution</application>
@@ -125,3 +150,9 @@
 
 
 
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