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<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index"/>
<revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-16" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-17" status="review"/>
<desc>
Introduction to the <app>Empathy</app> instant messenger.
</desc>
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<p>
<app>Empathy</app> is an instant messaging application for the GNOME Desktop.
- It supports text messaging, voice &amp; video call even using SIP,
- file transfers and all the most used messaging systems such as MSN and Google Talk.
+ It supports text messaging, voice &amp; video call, file transfers and all the
+ most used messaging systems such as MSN and Google Talk.
</p>
<p>
<app>Empathy</app> includes features that help you better collaborate while at work,
and that let you easily keep in touch with your friends.
</p>
<p>
- You can group all the conversations on a single window, or have multiple windows for
+ You can group all the conversations in a single window, or have multiple windows for
different kind of conversations; easily search through your previous conversations, and
share your desktop in just two clicks.
</p>
<p>
<media type="image" src="figures/empathy-main-window.png" mime="image/png">
- <app>Empathy</app> main window
+ <app>Empathy</app> main window.
</media>
</p>