From 774584fd4dc7e4dd6f8ed878407aaa3d885c03e8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Aaron Weber <aaron@helixcode.com>
Date: Wed, 4 Oct 2000 05:18:55 +0000
Subject: Spellcheck. Fixed some wording, and responded to clahey's
 suggestions--

2000-10-04  Aaron Weber  <aaron@helixcode.com>

	* C/usage-contact.sgml: Spellcheck. Fixed some wording, and
	responded to clahey's suggestions-- notably, commented out the
	"add to master list" category feature.

	* C/usage-calendar.sgml: Spellcheck. Fixed wording, event overlap
        description.

	* C/evolution-guide.sgml: Spellcheck. Commented out Notes
	entities.

	* C/usage-notes.sgml: Spellchecked, then decided to comment out
	this file/chapter and all references to it, since it's unlikely to
	be implemented any time soon.

	* C/config-setupassist.sgml: Spellcheck. Other minor updates. May
	  need more work in the near future.

	* C/usage-sync.sgml: Now it's really short. And spelled correctly.

2000-10-03  Aaron Weber  <aaron@helixcode.com>

	* C/config-prefs.sgml: Mostly spelling. Still needs major
	alteration.

	* C/menuref.sgml: s/Appintment/Appointment, fixed small errors,
	ran spellcheck. Still needs lots of work, since many menus have
	changed.

	* C/apx-gloss.sgml: Added Virus, Protocol, fixed vFolder,
	spellchecked.

svn path=/trunk/; revision=5702
---
 doc/C/usage-notes.sgml | 18 ++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'doc/C/usage-notes.sgml')

diff --git a/doc/C/usage-notes.sgml b/doc/C/usage-notes.sgml
index 378b9c3866..1ff2283128 100644
--- a/doc/C/usage-notes.sgml
+++ b/doc/C/usage-notes.sgml
@@ -8,19 +8,19 @@
       storage.  These scraps of paper were called notes.  Now, notes
       are an almost necessary part of our lives, albeit in electronic
       form.  It only makes sense, then, that
-      <application>Evolution</application> has a Notes feature.
-      <application>Evolution</application> can help you take notes in
-      the following ways:
+      <application>Evolution</application> will eventually have a
+      Notes feature.  <application>Evolution</application> can help
+      you take notes in the following ways:
      <itemizedlist>
        <listitem>
          <para>
-           You can take down phone numbers, take school notes, take phone
+           Take down phone numbers, take school notes, take phone
 	   messages, or even write poetry.
          </para>
        </listitem>
        <listitem>
          <para>
-           You can color code notes to organize them, or just to
+           Color code notes to organize them, or just to
            make them look good.
          </para>
        </listitem>
@@ -31,14 +31,16 @@
        </listitem>
        <listitem>
          <para>
-           Something
+           Write <glossterm>Haiku</glossterm>
          </para>
        </listitem>
      </itemizedlist>
    </para>
    <para>
-     You can start writing notes by clicking <guibutton>Notes</guibutton> in the
-     shortcut bar.
+     You can start writing notes by clicking
+     <guibutton>Notes</guibutton> in the shortcut bar.  Of course,
+     it's not there yet. But when it is, it'll take you to the
+     notepad.
    </para>
   </abstract>
 </chapter>
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