From e67f0c1d828de49b796b72181a6ddd1c51900a25 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kevin Breit <battery841@mediaone.net>
Date: Mon, 9 Jul 2001 20:50:14 +0000
Subject: Editing

2001-07-09  Kevin Breit  <battery841@mediaone.net>

	* C/usage-exec-summary.sgml: Editing

	* C/usage-mail.sgml: Editing

	* C/usage-mail-org.sgml: Editing

	* C/usage-calendar.sgml: Editing

	* C/usage-contact.sgml: Editing

svn path=/trunk/; revision=10931
---
 doc/C/usage-mail.sgml | 15 ++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'doc/C/usage-mail.sgml')

diff --git a/doc/C/usage-mail.sgml b/doc/C/usage-mail.sgml
index 628cade7b8..8a6c379868 100644
--- a/doc/C/usage-mail.sgml
+++ b/doc/C/usage-mail.sgml
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
       mail. There's also the <application>Evolution</application>
       <link linkend="usage-mail-organize-vFolders">Virtual
       Folder</link>, an advanced organizational feature not found in
-      many other mail clients.  If you get a lot of mail, or if you keep
+      mainstream mail clients.  If you get a lot of mail, or if you keep
       every message you get in case you need to refer to it later,
       you'll find this feature especially useful.
     </para>
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
     </para>
     
     <para>
-      The <guilabel>Email List</guilabel> lists off all the emails that you
+      The <guilabel>Email List</guilabel> displays all the emails that you
       have.  This includes all your read, unread, and email that is flagged 
       to be deleted.
     </para>
@@ -665,7 +665,7 @@ with quoted materials and the relevant replies interspersed-->
           use the <guibutton>Reply to List</guibutton> instead of the standard
           <guibutton>Reply</guibutton> or <guibutton>Reply to All</guibutton>.
           <note>
-            <title>Whats a Mailing List?</title>
+            <title>What is a Mailing List?</title>
             <para>
               Mailing Lists are one of the most popular ways in which group
               collaboration on the Internet works.  They allow people to send one
@@ -1015,8 +1015,7 @@ with quoted materials and the relevant replies interspersed-->
       <sect2 id="usage-mail-getnsend-ettiquette">
         <title>Seven Tips for Email Courtesy</title>
         <para>
-          I started with ten, but four were "Don't send
-          <glossterm linkend="spam">spam</glossterm>."
+
           <itemizedlist>
 
             <listitem>
@@ -1064,6 +1063,12 @@ with quoted materials and the relevant replies interspersed-->
 	      much, not too little.
 	    </para>
 	  </listitem>
+
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para>
+	      Don't send <glossterm linkend="spam">spam</glossterm>.
+	    </para>
+	  </listitem>
 	</itemizedlist>
       </para>
       <para> Happy mailing! </para>
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