From 7434b2831bd5604c6ee939c604cec5a91205b4d2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Aaron Weber <aaron@src.gnome.org>
Date: Fri, 26 May 2000 20:06:55 +0000
Subject: new file new file New directory, for figure graphics.

	* C/fig/mainwindow-pic.png: new file
	* C/fig/mail-druid-pic.png: new file
	* C/fig: New directory, for figure graphics.

	* C/apx-gloss.sgml: new file. glossary. thx. to kevin from chicago.

	* C/usage-setup.sgml: More accurate description of druid, and
	moved to mail section-- see usage-mail.sgml entry.  This is a new
	location for this entity, and it may move more later.


	* C/usage-mainwindow.sgml: altered description of starting
	evolution. added screenshot for main-window picture.

	* C/usage-mail.sgml: added screenshots, added coverage of setup
	druid and put it into get-and-send section, which is probably not
	where it should stay.  Also started filter druid coverage and
	clarified examples, esp. in Bcc: section.

	* C/usage-contact.sgml: Clarified examples.

	* C/preface.sgml: rewording of "what is" and "about book" sections.

	* C/evolution-guide.sgml: added glossary entity APX-GLOSS, altered
	phrasing in part intros, changed order of Setup-assistant section.

	* C/config-prefs.sgml: changed wording, removed ref. to re-running
	setup assistant.

svn path=/trunk/; revision=3222
---
 doc/C/usage-contact.sgml | 15 ++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'doc/C/usage-contact.sgml')

diff --git a/doc/C/usage-contact.sgml b/doc/C/usage-contact.sgml
index f88a3d5791..6cc9cd605f 100644
--- a/doc/C/usage-contact.sgml
+++ b/doc/C/usage-contact.sgml
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
         </para>
 	<para>
           Describe the interface.  Include the fact that the
-          whole book consists of a set of cards, organized into
+          whole address book consists of a set of cards, organized into
           folders.
         </para>
       </sect1>
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
       </sect1>
 
       <sect1 id="usage-contact-sharing">
-	<title>Sharing your cards (Or Keeping them to Yourself)</title>
+	<title>Sharing your Cards (and keeping them to yourself)</title>
 	<para>
            Cards can be shared over a network.  This is the sort of
            feature you'll want to use if your company has a list of
@@ -213,7 +213,11 @@
                 contacts there, so I know whom to call.  Since we also
                 share the calendars, I know that Deanna has already
                 scheduled a meeting with them next Thursday, and I can
-                just ask her to bring up my concerns at the meeting.
+                either go to the meeting myself or ask Deanna to
+                discuss my concerns for me.  Either way, I avoid
+                having to schedule yet another meeting with Company X,
+                which is good since everybody hates their products and
+                they're doomed to fail anyway.
              </para>
 	  </example>
 
@@ -225,9 +229,9 @@
            decide which folders you want to make accessible to others.
         </para>
 	<para>
-           To begin sharing a folder of address cards, select <!--
+           To begin sharing a folder of address cards, select (something) <!--
            DESCRIBE PROCESS HERE -->.  The
-           <interface>Sharing</interface> will pop up.  It contains:
+           <interface>Sharing</interface> window will pop up.  It contains:
            <!--DESCRIBE INTERFACE HERE-->
         </para>
       </sect1>
@@ -241,6 +245,7 @@
           mailing lists, you'll find that the contact manager is more
           than a mere address book.
         </para>
+
 	<sect2 id="contact-automation-basic">
 	  <title>Send me a card: Adding New Cards Quickly</title>
 	  <para>
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