From 7434b2831bd5604c6ee939c604cec5a91205b4d2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Aaron Weber <aaron@src.gnome.org>
Date: Fri, 26 May 2000 20:06:55 +0000
Subject: new file new file New directory, for figure graphics.

	* C/fig/mainwindow-pic.png: new file
	* C/fig/mail-druid-pic.png: new file
	* C/fig: New directory, for figure graphics.

	* C/apx-gloss.sgml: new file. glossary. thx. to kevin from chicago.

	* C/usage-setup.sgml: More accurate description of druid, and
	moved to mail section-- see usage-mail.sgml entry.  This is a new
	location for this entity, and it may move more later.


	* C/usage-mainwindow.sgml: altered description of starting
	evolution. added screenshot for main-window picture.

	* C/usage-mail.sgml: added screenshots, added coverage of setup
	druid and put it into get-and-send section, which is probably not
	where it should stay.  Also started filter druid coverage and
	clarified examples, esp. in Bcc: section.

	* C/usage-contact.sgml: Clarified examples.

	* C/preface.sgml: rewording of "what is" and "about book" sections.

	* C/evolution-guide.sgml: added glossary entity APX-GLOSS, altered
	phrasing in part intros, changed order of Setup-assistant section.

	* C/config-prefs.sgml: changed wording, removed ref. to re-running
	setup assistant.

svn path=/trunk/; revision=3222
---
 doc/C/preface.sgml | 36 +++++++++++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 23 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

(limited to 'doc/C/preface.sgml')

diff --git a/doc/C/preface.sgml b/doc/C/preface.sgml
index 05129eb550..9ccb257e5e 100644
--- a/doc/C/preface.sgml
+++ b/doc/C/preface.sgml
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
         by email, or to send email to a contact or appointment.
         <application>Evolution</application> makes displays faster and
         more efficient, so searches are faster and memory usage is
-        much lower.  People who get lots of mail will appreciate
+        lower.  People who get lots of mail will appreciate
         advanced features like <link
         linkend="usage-mail-organize-vFolders">vFolders</link>, which
         let you save searches as though they were ordinary mail
@@ -93,16 +93,20 @@
 
     <section id="aboutbook">
       <title>About This Book</title>
-
     <!-- ************** FOLLOWING PARAGRAPH FOR DRAFT ONLY ************* -->
       <para>
-        This is a DRAFT of the <application>Evolution</application>
-        User's Guide.  Please send comments on it to
-        <email>aaron@helixcode.com</email>.  Items that are known to
-        need action are indicated as such, often with notation like
-        (INSERT CONTENT HERE).  If you have content to add, please
-        contact me.  This paragraph will be removed in later versions
-        of the manual.
+        This version of the <application>Evolution</application>
+        User's Guide is a <emphasis>draft</emphasis>.  It is missing
+        huge chunks of information, and many of the features it
+        describes are unimplemented.  All the content is subject to
+        change, especially if you help.  Please send comments on the
+        guide to <email>aaron@helixcode.com</email>.  Items that are
+        known to need action are indicated as such, often with
+        notation like (INSERT CONTENT HERE).  If you would like to
+        work on the guide please contact me or see the GNOME
+        Documentation project <ulink
+        url="http://www.gnome.org/gdp">web site</ulink>.  This
+        paragraph will be removed in later versions of the manual.
       </para>
     <!-- ************* END DRAFT ONLY PARAGRAPH ************** -->
 
@@ -138,12 +142,18 @@
           It's listed below:
           <simplelist>
 	    <member><application>Applications</application></member>
-	    <member><command>Commands</command></member>
-	    <member><guilabel>Labels</guilabel>for menu items and buttons</member>
+	    <member><command>Commands</command> typed at the command line</member>
+	    <member><guilabel>Labels</guilabel> for menu items and buttons</member>
+	    <member>Other text treatments</member>
 	    <member>Other text treatments</member>
-	    <member>more info here</member>
 	  </simplelist>
         </para>
       </formalpara>
     </section>
-  </preface>
\ No newline at end of file
+  </preface>
+
+
+
+
+
+
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