Added "quickref and pointers" sections. Props to O'Reilly for the copy of

2000-08-31  Aaron Weber  <aaron@helixcode.com>

	* C/preface.sgml: Added "quickref and pointers" sections. Props to
	  O'Reilly for the copy of Outlook in a Nutshell which gave me the
	  idea.

2000-08-30  Aaron Weber  <aaron@helixcode.com>

	* C/usage-mainwindow.sgml: Minor fixes.

	* C/preface.sgml: Corrected grammar, added glossterms, described
	menuref.

svn path=/trunk/; revision=5136

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/doc/C/evolution-guide.sgml b/doc/C/evolution-guide.sgml
index b9b5f72adb..f7a7a87ab2 100644
--- a/doc/C/evolution-guide.sgml
+++ b/doc/C/evolution-guide.sgml
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
         <citetitle>GNU General Public License</citetitle>, or GPL.
       </para>
       <para>
-        The licenses are included with this document in <xref
+        These licenses are included with this document in <xref
         linkend="fdl">, and <xref linkend="gpl">; you may also obtain
         a copy from the Free Software Foundation by visiting <ulink
         type="http" url="http://www.fsf.org">their Web site</ulink> or
@@ -102,11 +102,11 @@
         <application>Evolution</application> is highly configurable.
         Usually, when developers say that, they mean that they didn't
         test it out thoroughly and have left it to other hackers to
-        "configure" themselves a working system.  When we say
-        configurable, we mean that although
-        <application>Evolution</application> will work perfectly well
-        with minimal setup hassle, you can alter its behavior to fit
-        your needs with just a little more work.
+        "configure" themselves a working system.  But in the case of
+        <application>Evolution</application>, you can expect that it
+        will work perfectly well with minimal setup hassle, and that
+        you can alter its behavior to fit your needs with just a
+        little more work.
       </para>
     </partintro>