From 13e6f423ecae4738efd38b527d08dda23655d036 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 1 Jul 2013 23:20:40 +0100
Subject: Review help about bookmarks

---
 help/C/bookmark-delete.page | 29 +++++++++++++++--------------
 help/C/bookmark-edit.page   | 40 +++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 2 files changed, 34 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)

(limited to 'help')

diff --git a/help/C/bookmark-delete.page b/help/C/bookmark-delete.page
index 01540e756..3a28bf371 100644
--- a/help/C/bookmark-delete.page
+++ b/help/C/bookmark-delete.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#bookmark"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-05-07" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
@@ -13,36 +13,37 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
     <credit type="copyright editor">
-      <name></name>
-      <email its:translate="no"></email>
-      <years></years>
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756@gmail.com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>How do I delete a bookmark?</desc>
+    <desc>How do I remove an unwanted bookmark?</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Remove a bookmark</title>
+  <title>Delete a bookmark</title>
 
-  <p>Delete bookmarks once they are no longer needed.</p>
+  <p>You can delete old and unwanted bookmarks.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <title>To delete a bookmark:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu"><app>Web</app></gui>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Web</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Bookmarks</gui></guiseq> to open the
       <gui>Bookmarks</gui> window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the list on the left side, select the topic under which
-      your bookmark is classified.</p>
+      <p>From the <gui>Topics</gui> list on the left side, select the topic
+      that your bookmark is classified under.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>A list of bookmarks classified under your chosen topic will now be
-      present on the right side. Select the bookmark that you wish to delete
-      by clicking it, and press <key>Delete</key>. Alternatively, you can
-      also right click the bookmark and select <gui>Delete</gui>.</p>
+      <p>A list of bookmarks in the selected <gui>Topic</gui> will be shown on
+      the right side of the window. Select the bookmarks that you wish to
+      delete, then select
+      <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui style="menuitem">Delete</gui></guiseq>.
+      You can also right click the bookmark and select <gui>Delete</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/help/C/bookmark-edit.page b/help/C/bookmark-edit.page
index d35818680..892efda4b 100644
--- a/help/C/bookmark-edit.page
+++ b/help/C/bookmark-edit.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#bookmark"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-05-07" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
     <credit type="copyright editor">
-      <name></name>
-      <email its:translate="no"></email>
-      <years></years>
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756@gmail.com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -31,30 +31,28 @@
   <steps>
     <title>To edit a bookmark:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu"><app>Web</app></gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">Bookmarks</gui></guiseq> to open the
-      <gui>Bookmarks</gui> window.</p>
+      <p>Select
+      <guiseq><gui style="menu">Web</gui><gui style="menuitem">Bookmarks</gui></guiseq>
+      to open the <gui>Bookmarks</gui> window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the list on the left side, select the topic under which
-      your bookmark is classified.</p>
+      <p>From the <gui>Topics</gui> list on the left side, select the topic
+      that your bookmark is classified under.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>A list of bookmarks classified under your chosen topic will now be
-      present on the right side. Right click the bookmark that you wish to edit
-      and select <gui>Properties</gui>. A new window with the existing
-      properties of your bookmark will pop up. You can edit these properties
-      as you wish.</p>
-      <note style="tip">
-	<p>Right click the bookmark of your choice and select <gui>Rename…</gui>
-        if you want to just rename your bookmark. When you do
-	this, the name of the bookmark is highlighted. You can now type in the
-	new name for your bookmark.</p>
-      </note>
+      <p>A list of bookmarks in the selected <gui>Topic</gui> will be shown on
+      the right side of the window. Select the bookmarks that you wish to
+      update, then select
+      <guiseq><gui style="menu">File</gui><gui style="menuitem">Properties</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>When you are done editing, click <gui style="button">Close</gui>.</p>
+      <p>You can now update the bookmark title, URL and the topics that it is
+      listed under.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+	<p>If you only want to rename a bookmark, right click on it and select
+  <gui style="menuitem">Rename…</gui> and type in the new name for your
+  bookmark.</p>
+
 </page>
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