From 613f56dee0534b621352eebd6000b2045129ddb3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Michael Hill <mdhill@gnome.org>
Date: Sat, 6 Jul 2013 12:50:40 -0400
Subject: Review bookmark-smart, browse-private

---
 help/C/bookmark-smart.page |  2 +-
 help/C/browse-private.page | 17 ++++++++---------
 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'help/C')

diff --git a/help/C/bookmark-smart.page b/help/C/bookmark-smart.page
index 4b6b28330..7e6b199c7 100644
--- a/help/C/bookmark-smart.page
+++ b/help/C/bookmark-smart.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#bookmark"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="bookmark"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-02" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
diff --git a/help/C/browse-private.page b/help/C/browse-private.page
index da5a5ea35..8d95dc6b8 100644
--- a/help/C/browse-private.page
+++ b/help/C/browse-private.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#adv"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-06-30" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-06-30" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>What is the <gui>Incognito</gui> mode?</desc>
+    <desc>What is <em>incognito</em> mode?</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Private browsing</title>
@@ -38,11 +38,11 @@
   lend your computer to a friend, for example, to check their email using
   webmail because you will not be logged into any websites in the private
   browsing window, nor will their information be saved. This also means that
-  private browsing is a more secure way of accessing sensitive website such as
+  private browsing is a more secure way of accessing sensitive websites such as
   Internet banking and
   <link href="http://questionablecontent.net/">questionable content</link>
-  because it is more difficult for websites to identify you when in Incognito
-  mode.</p>
+  because it is more difficult for websites to identify you when in 
+  <em>incognito</em> mode.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <title></title>
@@ -51,16 +51,15 @@
       Incognito Window</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Browse the web using the Incognito mode.</p>
+      <p>Browse the web using incognito mode.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>End the private browsing session by closing the Incognito mode
-      window.</p>
+      <p>End the private browsing session by closing the incognito window.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <p>You can distinguish private browsing from normal browsing by the dark
-  theme that is used for the Incognito window:</p>
+  theme that is used for the incognito window:</p>
 
   <figure>
     <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/private-browsing-3-8.png">
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