From 511fe14ab2f960b4561011daf1cc2ba4b6c5abcb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Michael Hill <mdhill@gnome.org>
Date: Sat, 6 Jul 2013 09:50:18 -0400
Subject: Review of introduction, history and history-delete

---
 help/C/history-delete.page |  5 +++--
 help/C/history.page        | 10 +++++-----
 help/C/introduction.page   | 11 ++++++-----
 3 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/C/history-delete.page b/help/C/history-delete.page
index e949b6560..b6ba75ac4 100644
--- a/help/C/history-delete.page
+++ b/help/C/history-delete.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#privacy"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-06-30" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-06-30" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -27,7 +27,8 @@
 
   <p>You may sometimes wish to delete your browsing history, for example to
   remove items that you do not want to see in your search results. You can
-  delete one result, all results from one website or your whole history.</p>
+  choose to delete one result, all results from a single website or all of your
+  history.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
diff --git a/help/C/history.page b/help/C/history.page
index 17bafa503..6ee84ee6f 100644
--- a/help/C/history.page
+++ b/help/C/history.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#start"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="history-delete"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-06-30" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-06-30" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -27,11 +27,11 @@
   <title>Browsing history</title>
 
   <p>Your browsing history, the web pages that you have visited, is
-  automatically saved so that it is quicker for you to find pages that you have
-  already visited.</p>
+  automatically saved so that it is quicker for you to return to those
+  pages.</p>
 
   <p>To <em>search your history</em>, start typing your search term into the
-  address bar, then click on the correct result once you see it. The page title
-  and URL will be searched, but the content will not be searched.</p>
+  address bar, then click on the correct result once you see it. The search
+  will include the page title and URL , but not the page content.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 59d8d6ea2..e37deb587 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-06-30" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-06-30" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -20,16 +20,17 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>An introduction to the <app>Epiphany</app> web browser, which is also known as <app>Web</app>.</desc>
+    <desc>An introduction to the <app>Epiphany</app> web browser, which is also
+    known as <app>Web</app>.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <p><app>Epiphany</app> is the GNOME web browser. It displayes webpages with
+  <p><app>Epiphany</app> is the GNOME web browser. It displays webpages with
   the same same speed and accuracy as other popular browsers, while respecting
-  your privicy by default.</p>
+  your privacy by default.</p>
 
-  <p>In GNOME 3, <app>Epiphany</app> is also knows as <app>Web</app>.</p>
+  <p>In GNOME 3, <app>Epiphany</app> is also known as <app>Web</app>.</p>
 
   <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/epiphany-3-8.png">
     <p>Fullscreen screenshot of Epiphany with
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