From 128bb0cea35972f2c12998a26c2e6ea8b049c80e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Michael Hill <mdhill@gnome.org>
Date: Sat, 6 Jul 2013 11:10:35 -0400
Subject: Review cookies.xml, pref-cookies page

---
 help/C/cookies.xml       |  4 ++--
 help/C/pref-cookies.page | 17 +++++++++--------
 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/C/cookies.xml b/help/C/cookies.xml
index e77643a2a..c0a897605 100644
--- a/help/C/cookies.xml
+++ b/help/C/cookies.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#privacy"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="data"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-02" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   </comment>
 
   <p>A browser <em>cookie</em> is a small piece of data sent from a website and
-  stored on your computer while you are browsing a website. When the you
+  stored on your computer while you are browsing that website. When the you
   return to the same website in the future, the data stored in the cookie can
   be retrieved by the website to notify the website of your previous activity.
   Cookies are a common method used by web servers to know whether you are
diff --git a/help/C/pref-cookies.page b/help/C/pref-cookies.page
index ce75130c7..992b6a5f5 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-cookies.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-cookies.page
@@ -6,22 +6,22 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#privacy"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="pref"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-02" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756@gmail.com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
-<!--    <credit type="copyright editor">
-      <name></name>
-      <email its:translate="no"></email>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhill@gnome.org</email>
       <years></years>
-    </credit>-->
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Chose which websites to accept cookies from.</desc>
+    <desc>How do I choose which websites I allow to set cookies?</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Set cookie preference</title>
@@ -38,8 +38,9 @@
       <guiseq><gui style="menu">Web</gui><gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui><gui style="tab">Privacy</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select whether you want to accept cookies from all websites, only from
-      websites which you have visited or to not accept any cookies.</p>
+      <p>Select whether you want to accept cookies from all websites, accept
+      cookies only from websites which you have visited or to not accept any
+      cookies.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
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