Review help about bookmarks

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/help/C/bookmark-delete.page b/help/C/bookmark-delete.page
index 01540e756..3a28bf371 100644
--- a/help/C/bookmark-delete.page
+++ b/help/C/bookmark-delete.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#bookmark"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-05-07" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
@@ -13,36 +13,37 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
     <credit type="copyright editor">
-      <name></name>
-      <email its:translate="no"></email>
-      <years></years>
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756@gmail.com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>How do I delete a bookmark?</desc>
+    <desc>How do I remove an unwanted bookmark?</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Remove a bookmark</title>
+  <title>Delete a bookmark</title>
 
-  <p>Delete bookmarks once they are no longer needed.</p>
+  <p>You can delete old and unwanted bookmarks.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <title>To delete a bookmark:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu"><app>Web</app></gui>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Web</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Bookmarks</gui></guiseq> to open the
       <gui>Bookmarks</gui> window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the list on the left side, select the topic under which
-      your bookmark is classified.</p>
+      <p>From the <gui>Topics</gui> list on the left side, select the topic
+      that your bookmark is classified under.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>A list of bookmarks classified under your chosen topic will now be
-      present on the right side. Select the bookmark that you wish to delete
-      by clicking it, and press <key>Delete</key>. Alternatively, you can
-      also right click the bookmark and select <gui>Delete</gui>.</p>
+      <p>A list of bookmarks in the selected <gui>Topic</gui> will be shown on
+      the right side of the window. Select the bookmarks that you wish to
+      delete, then select
+      <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui style="menuitem">Delete</gui></guiseq>.
+      You can also right click the bookmark and select <gui>Delete</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>