Remove the editorializing from the introduction section, since the

2003-05-06  David Adam Bordoley <bordoley@msu.edu>

	* help/C/epiphany.xml:

	Remove the editorializing from the introduction section,
	since the Documentation Style Guide specifically states
	not to do this. Remove the screenshot from the docs too,
	its old and needs to be redone to meet our guidlines.
	Write the Getting Started section, changing terminology
	to "open" instead of "start." Marco would it be worthwhile
	to add a docs specific changelog?

2 files changed, 73 insertions, 118 deletions

diff --git a/ChangeLog b/ChangeLog
index 5ce87713b..04288f9c3 100644
--- a/ChangeLog
+++ b/ChangeLog
@@ -1,6 +1,18 @@
 2003-05-06  David Adam Bordoley <bordoley@msu.edu>
 
 	* help/C/epiphany.xml:
+	
+	Remove the editorializing from the introduction section,
+	since the Documentation Style Guide specifically states
+	not to do this. Remove the screenshot from the docs too,
+	its old and needs to be redone to meet our guidlines.
+	Write the Getting Started section, changing terminology
+	to "open" instead of "start." Marco would it be worthwhile
+	to add a docs specific changelog?
+
+2003-05-06  David Adam Bordoley <bordoley@msu.edu>
+
+	* help/C/epiphany.xml:
 
 	Initial checkin of the help stubs. Need to hook
 	these up to the ui and actually write the help.
diff --git a/help/C/epiphany.xml b/help/C/epiphany.xml
index c3962452c..aff6ceb39 100644
--- a/help/C/epiphany.xml
+++ b/help/C/epiphany.xml
@@ -96,133 +96,57 @@
   <sect1 id="fr-introduction"> 
     <title>Introduction</title> 
     <para>&fr; is a GNOME web browser based on the mozilla rendering 
-	engine. A web browser is more than an application, it is a way 
-	of thinking, it is a way of seeing the world. Epiphany's 
-	principles are simplicity and standards compliance.
-
+	engine. &fr; aims to be a simple to use	and standards compliant.
    </para>
-    <figure id="fr-add-dialog-fig">
-	<title>Epiphany Screenshot</title>
-	<screenshot> 
-	  <mediaobject> 
-	    <imageobject><imagedata
-		fileref="figures/ephy-screenshot.png" format="PNG"/> 
-	    </imageobject>
-	  </mediaobject>
-	</screenshot>
-      </figure>
-   
-
-   <para>	
-   <itemizedlist>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Simplicity:</para>
-      <para>
-Epiphany aims to utilize the simplest interface possible for a browser.  Keep
-in mind that simple does not necessarily mean less powerful.  We believe
-the commonly used browsers of today are too big, buggy, and bloated. Epiphany
-addresses simplicity with a small browser designed for the web -- not mail,
-newsgroups, file management, instant messenging or coffee making.  The UNIX
-philosophy is to design small tools that do one thing, and do it well.
-
-Epiphany also address simplicity with modularity to make a light and powerful
-application.  If something can be implemented using external applications
-or components, we use it rather than wasting resources in the web browser.
-Integration will be achived with CORBA, Bonobo, and the ever popular
-command line.  
-
-Mail will be handled with your favorite e-mail application (Evolution, pine,
-mutt, balsa, pronto, whatever).
-      </para>
-    </listitem>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Standards compliance:</para>
-      <para>
-The introduction of non-standard features in browsers could make it difficult
-or impossible to use alternative products like Epiphany if developers embrace
-them.  Alternative (standards complying) browsers could not be able to
-fully access web sites making use of these features.  The success of
-non-standard features can ultimately lead to forcing one browser, on
-one platform to dominate the market. Standards compliance ensures the 
-freedom of choice.  Epiphany aims to achieve this.
-      </para>
-    </listitem>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>USER INTERFACE LINES</para>
-        <itemizedlist>
-          <listitem>
-            <para>HIG compliance</para>
-              <para>
-Epiphany is going to follow version 1.0 of the gnome 
-user guidelines. Unless there are very seriuos reasons to make an 
-exception not following it will be considered a bug. 
-"I follow the HIG only when I like it" is not a legitimate approach. 
-Any areas where we diverge from the HIG will communicated 
-to the HIG team for future consideration.
-            </para>
-          </listitem>
-          <listitem>
-            <para>Gnome integration</para>
-            <para>
-Epiphany's main goal is to be integrated with the gnome desktop. 
-We dont aim to make epiphany usable outside Gnome. If someone will like 
-to use it anyway, it's just a plus. Ex: Making people happy that 
-don't have control center installed is not a good reason 
-to have mime configuration in epiphany itself.
-            </para>
-          </listitem>
-          <listitem>
-            <para>Simple design</para>
-            <para>
-Feature bloat and user interface clutter is evil :)
-            </para>
-          </listitem>
-          <listitem>
-            <para>Preferences</para>
-            <para>
-We will follow the new gnome policy about preferences. 
-I think Havoc Pennington already explained it a lot 
-better than I could ever do.
-http://www106.pair.com/rhp/free-software-ui.html
-            </para>
-          </listitem>
-          <listitem>
-            <para>User target</para>
-            <para>
-We target non-technical users by design. 
-This happens to be 90% of the user population.
-(Technical details should not exposed in the interface)
-We target web users, we dont directly target web developers.
-A few geek-oriented feautures can be kept as 
-long as they are non-obtrusive.
-            </para>
-          </listitem>
-        </itemizedlist>
-    </listitem>
-  </itemizedlist>
-  </para>
   </sect1>
 
 <!-- ============= Getting Started =============================== -->
   <sect1 id="ephy-getting-started">
       <title>Getting Started</title>
-      <para>
-      </para>
 
-        <sect2 id="ephy-to-start">
-          <title>To Start &fr;</title>
-          <para>
-          </para>
+        <sect2 id="ephy-to-open-browser-window">
+          <title>To Open a Browser Window</title>
+          	<para>You can open a browser window in the following ways:</para>
+		<variablelist>
+    		<varlistentry>
+    		<term><guimenu>Applications</guimenu> menu</term>
+    		<listitem>
+    		<para>Choose 
+    		<menuchoice>
+    		<guisubmenu>Internet</guisubmenu>
+    		<guimenuitem>Web Browser</guimenuitem>
+    		</menuchoice>. </para>
+    		</listitem>
+    		</varlistentry>
+    		<varlistentry>
+    		<term>Command line</term>
+    		<listitem>
+    		<para>Type <command>epiphany</command>, then press <keycap>Return</keycap>.</para>
+    		</listitem>
+    		</varlistentry>
+    		</variablelist>
         </sect2>
         <sect2 id="ephy-to-open-bookmarks">
-          <title>To Open Your Bookmarks</title>
-          <para>
-          </para>
-        </sect2>
-        <sect2 id="ephy-to-open-file">
-          <title>To Open a File</title>
-          <para>
-          </para>
+          <title>To Open the Bookmarks Window</title>
+                <para>You can open the bookmarks window in the following ways:</para>
+		<variablelist>
+    		<varlistentry>
+    		<term><guimenu>Applications</guimenu> menu</term>
+    		<listitem>
+    		<para>Choose 
+    		<menuchoice>
+    		<guisubmenu>Internet</guisubmenu>
+    		<guimenuitem>Web Bookmarks</guimenuitem>
+    		</menuchoice>. </para>
+    		</listitem>
+    		</varlistentry>
+    		<varlistentry>
+    		<term>Command line</term>
+    		<listitem>
+    		<para>Type <command>epiphany -b</command>, then press <keycap>Return</keycap>.</para>
+    		</listitem>
+    		</varlistentry>
+    		</variablelist>
         </sect2>
 
   </sect1>
@@ -268,6 +192,15 @@ long as they are non-obtrusive.
           <title>To Open a New Tab</title>
           <para>
           </para>
+	<sect2 id="ephy-to-open-file">
+          <title>To Open a File</title>
+          <para>To open a file, choose 
+		  <menuchoice> <guimenu>File</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Open...</guimenuitem>
+			 </menuchoice>
+		  to display the <guilabel>Open File</guilabel> dialog. Select the file
+		  that you want to open, then click <guibutton>OK</guibutton>. The file is
+		  displayed in the browser window. </para>
+        </sect2>
         </sect2>
 	<sect2 id="to-open-link">
           <title>To Open a Link</title>
@@ -346,6 +279,11 @@ long as they are non-obtrusive.
           <para>
           </para>
         </sect2>
+	<sect2 id="to-creating-new-bookmark">
+	  <title>To Create a New Bookmark</title>
+          <para>
+          </para>
+        </sect2>
 	<sect2 id="to-select-bookmarks">
           <title>To Select Bookmarks</title>
           <para>
@@ -381,6 +319,11 @@ long as they are non-obtrusive.
           <para>
           </para>
         </sect2>
+	<sect2 id="to-edit-bookmark-properties">
+	  <title>To Edit a Bookmark's Properties</title>
+          <para>
+          </para>
+        </sect2>
 	<sect2 id="to-search-bookmarks">
           <title>To Search Your Bookmarks</title>
           <para>