From 81083111d84e63d44f868bb656482e16d70859d9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Shaun McCance Date: Mon, 26 Apr 2010 09:54:32 -0500 Subject: [help] Minor language tweaks to updated content --- help/C/create-account.page | 7 +++---- help/C/irc-join-pwd.page | 10 ++++------ 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) (limited to 'help') diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page index 19232e806..404172a32 100644 --- a/help/C/create-account.page +++ b/help/C/create-account.page @@ -45,12 +45,11 @@
Facebook

- Facebook is one of the most used social network. It provides users with - the opportunity to create their own profile, and to communicate with their - friends. + Facebook is one of the most-used social networks. It allows users to + create their own profile and to communicate with their friends.

- In order to use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need + To use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need to create a new account from the website: www.facebook.com.

diff --git a/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page b/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page index b8fd52afb..f883094bc 100644 --- a/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page +++ b/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page @@ -26,20 +26,18 @@

On some IRC networks, private IRC rooms may be protected with a password. -

-

- To join such a room, if you know the password: + If you know the password, use the following steps to join:

- Join the room. + Join the room as normal.

- In the This room is protected by a password text box, type the - IRC room password, and click on Join. + Empathy will prompt you for a password. Enter the password for the + IRC chat room and click Join.

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