From 81083111d84e63d44f868bb656482e16d70859d9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shaun McCance <shaunm@gnome.org>
Date: Mon, 26 Apr 2010 09:54:32 -0500
Subject: [help] Minor language tweaks to updated content

---
 help/C/create-account.page |  7 +++----
 help/C/irc-join-pwd.page   | 10 ++++------
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'help')

diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page
index 19232e806..404172a32 100644
--- a/help/C/create-account.page
+++ b/help/C/create-account.page
@@ -45,12 +45,11 @@
   <section id="facebook">
     <title>Facebook</title>
     <p>
-      Facebook is one of the most used social network.  It provides users with 
-      the opportunity to create their own profile, and to communicate with their
-      friends. 
+      Facebook is one of the most-used social networks.  It allows users to
+      create their own profile and to communicate with their friends. 
     </p>
     <p>
-      In order to use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need 
+      To use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need 
       to create a new account from the website: 
       <link href="http://www.facebook.com">www.facebook.com</link>.
     </p>
diff --git a/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page b/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page
index b8fd52afb..f883094bc 100644
--- a/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page
+++ b/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page
@@ -26,20 +26,18 @@
 
   <p>
     On some IRC networks, private IRC rooms may be protected with a password.
-  </p>
-  <p>
-    To join such a room, if you know the password:
+    If you know the password, use the following steps to join:
   </p>
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>
-        <link xref="irc-join-room">Join the room</link>.
+        <link xref="irc-join-room">Join the room</link> as normal.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-        In the <gui>This room is protected by a password</gui> text box, type the
-        IRC room password, and click on <gui style="button">Join</gui>.
+        Empathy will prompt you for a password. Enter the password for the
+        IRC chat room and click <gui style="button">Join</gui>.
       </p>
     </item>
   </steps>
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