From 871a256b4eda943d1924bde6109f66197be060ca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Harold Schreckengost
Date: Sun, 2 May 2010 18:20:49 +0200
Subject: [help] Fixed some typos
---
help/C/create-account.page | 2 +-
help/C/introduction.page | 17 +++++------------
2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
(limited to 'help/C')
diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page
index 404172a32..4aa01710b 100644
--- a/help/C/create-account.page
+++ b/help/C/create-account.page
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
This page provides information on creating a new account for various types of
accounts. Your account provider should give you a login ID and a password, as well
- as any additional information you need to connect with Empathy.
+ as any additional information you need to connect using Empathy.
Empathy is an instant messaging application for the GNOME Desktop.
- It supports text messaging, voice & video call, file transfers and all the
+ It supports text messaging, voice & video calls, file transfers, and all the
most used messaging systems such as MSN and Google Talk.
@@ -37,9 +30,9 @@
and that let you easily keep in touch with your friends.
- You can group all the conversations in a single window, have multiple windows for
- different kind of conversations, easily search through your previous conversations and
- share your desktop in just two clicks.
+ Using Empathy, you can group all the conversations in a single window,
+ have multiple windows for different kind of conversations, easily search through
+ your previous conversations, and share your desktop in just two clicks.