From 817de24eacc3265b8a8c0ff19eb581d9aea5cc46 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shaun McCance <shaunm@gnome.org>
Date: Sun, 30 Aug 2009 11:54:09 -0500
Subject: [help] Updates to 'Add an account' topic

---
 help/C/add-account.page | 72 +++++++++++++++++++------------------------------
 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 45 deletions(-)

(limited to 'help/C')

diff --git a/help/C/add-account.page b/help/C/add-account.page
index 5df73e877..53c9ea475 100644
--- a/help/C/add-account.page
+++ b/help/C/add-account.page
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="add-account">
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="add-account">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#accounts"/>
@@ -22,69 +22,51 @@
 
   <title>Add a new account</title>
 
+  <p>You can add instant messaging accounts from any support service to communicate
+  with all of your contacts in <app>Empathy</app>.  For some service providers,
+  these steps will also allow you to register for a new account.  For more details,
+  see <link xref="create-account"/>.</p>
+
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>
-	      From the <gui>Contact List</gui> window, perform one of the following:
-      </p>
-      <list>
-	      <item>
-	        <p>
-	          Press <key>F4</key>.
-          </p>
-        </item>
-        <item>
-          <p>
-            Choose <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Accounts</gui></guiseq>.
-          </p>
-        </item>
-      </list>
+      <p>From the <gui>Contact List</gui> window, choose <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui>
+      <gui>Accounts</gui></guiseq>, or press <key>F4</key>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        Click on the <gui style="button">Add</gui> button.
-      </p>
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Add</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        From the <gui>Add new</gui> drop-down list choose
-        the service you wish to add an account for, then click
-        on the <gui style="button">Create</gui> button.
-      </p>
+      <p>From the <gui>Add new</gui> drop-down list, choose the service you wish to add
+      an account for.  If you would like to <link xref="create-account">register for a
+      new account</link> with the service provider, select <gui>Create a new account</gui>.
+      Click <gui>Create</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        Fill the required fields with your <em>user name</em> and <em>password</em>.
-      </p>
+      <p>Enter the required information.  For most accounts, you will only need
+      a login ID and a password.  Some accounts may require additional information.
+      See <link xref="accounts-window#details"/> for more information.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        Click on <gui style="button">Connect</gui> to enable the new account.
-      </p>
+      <p>Click <gui style="button">Connect</gui> to enable the new account.</p>
 
       <!-- TODO: check if it's a bug or what. In case, this part needs to
       be removed or we must signal it as a bug! -->
 
       <note style="warning">
-        <p>
-          If you do not click on <gui style="button">Connect</gui>, and you close
-          the dialog, the account will not be created, and it will be necessary to
-          create it again.
-        </p>
-        <p>
-          If you do not click on <gui style="button">Connect</gui>, and you select
-          another account from the dialog, the data you inserted will be lost.
-        </p>
+        <p>If you close the <gui>Accounts</gui> window without clicking
+        <gui>Connect</gui>, the entire account will be lost, and you will
+        need to create it again.</p>
+        <p>If you select another account without clicking <gui>Connect</gui>,
+        any information you have entered will be lost.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>
-      If you want to change the name that identifies the account in the <gui>Accounts</gui>
-      dialog, double-click on the name of the account in the box on the left of the dialog
-      and type the new name.
-    </p>
+    <p>To change the name the identifies the account in the <gui>Accounts</gui>
+    window, select the account from the list on the left and either click on the
+    name or press the space bar.  Edit the account name and press <key>Enter</key>
+    when you’re finished.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>
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