From a64a6378eb3098be9e51d1dda253f7fb0c4c1fa3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shaun McCance <shaunm@gnome.org>
Date: Wed, 9 Sep 2009 11:38:39 -0500
Subject: [help] Minimal proofreading, deferring some reviews to after 2.28.0

---
 help/C/geolocation-privacy.page | 15 ++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'help/C/geolocation-privacy.page')

diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page b/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page
index 23694e2b7..de5a5b2f7 100644
--- a/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page
@@ -1,13 +1,18 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="geolocation-privacy">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic"
+      id="geolocation-privacy">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="geolocation#geoloc"/>
     <desc>
       What information are sent and to who.
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+      <!--
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+      -->
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
@@ -19,10 +24,10 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Geolocation privacy</title>
+  <title>Geolocation Privacy</title>
 
   <section id="info-sent">
-  <title>What are the information sent</title>
+  <title>What information is sent</title>
   <p>
     What is possible to send is: your country, region, locality, area, street, building,
     floor, room, and postal code, longitude, latitude and altitude, speed and bearing.
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