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| -rw-r--r-- | help/C/create-account.page | 7 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | help/C/irc-join-pwd.page | 10 |
2 files changed, 7 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page index 19232e806..404172a32 100644 --- a/help/C/create-account.page +++ b/help/C/create-account.page @@ -45,12 +45,11 @@ <section id="facebook"> <title>Facebook</title> <p> - Facebook is one of the most used social network. It provides users with - the opportunity to create their own profile, and to communicate with their - friends. + Facebook is one of the most-used social networks. It allows users to + create their own profile and to communicate with their friends. </p> <p> - In order to use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need + To use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need to create a new account from the website: <link href="http://www.facebook.com">www.facebook.com</link>. </p> diff --git a/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page b/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page index b8fd52afb..f883094bc 100644 --- a/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page +++ b/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page @@ -26,20 +26,18 @@ <p> On some IRC networks, private IRC rooms may be protected with a password. - </p> - <p> - To join such a room, if you know the password: + If you know the password, use the following steps to join: </p> <steps> <item> <p> - <link xref="irc-join-room">Join the room</link>. + <link xref="irc-join-room">Join the room</link> as normal. </p> </item> <item> <p> - In the <gui>This room is protected by a password</gui> text box, type the - IRC room password, and click on <gui style="button">Join</gui>. + Empathy will prompt you for a password. Enter the password for the + IRC chat room and click <gui style="button">Join</gui>. </p> </item> </steps> |