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diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page index 404172a32..4aa01710b 100644 --- a/help/C/create-account.page +++ b/help/C/create-account.page @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ <p>This page provides information on creating a new account for various types of accounts. Your account provider should give you a login ID and a password, as well - as any additional information you need to connect with <app>Empathy</app>.</p> + as any additional information you need to connect using <app>Empathy</app>.</p> <section id="facebook"> <title>Facebook</title> diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page index 2d334f612..e7f96b899 100644 --- a/help/C/introduction.page +++ b/help/C/introduction.page @@ -15,21 +15,14 @@ </credit> <license> <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p> - </license> -<!-- - <copyright> - <year>2009</year> - <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name> - </copyright> - <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> ---> + </license> </info> <title>Introduction</title> <p> <app>Empathy</app> is an instant messaging application for the GNOME Desktop. - It supports text messaging, voice & video call, file transfers and all the + It supports text messaging, voice & video calls, file transfers, and all the most used messaging systems such as MSN and Google Talk. </p> <p> @@ -37,9 +30,9 @@ and that let you easily keep in touch with your friends. </p> <p> - You can group all the conversations in a single window, have multiple windows for - different kind of conversations, easily search through your previous conversations and - share your desktop in just two clicks. + Using <app>Empathy</app>, you can group all the conversations in a single window, + have multiple windows for different kind of conversations, easily search through + your previous conversations, and share your desktop in just two clicks. </p> <figure> |