[help] More reviews and updates for account management topics

1 files changed, 50 insertions, 78 deletions

diff --git a/help/C/status-icons.page b/help/C/status-icons.page
index 35c91e543..115d36eb4 100644
--- a/help/C/status-icons.page
+++ b/help/C/status-icons.page
@@ -1,18 +1,23 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="status-icons">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="concept"
+      id="status-icons">
 
   <info>
-    <desc>
-      Understanding the various status icons.
-    </desc>
+    <desc>Understanding the various statuses and status icons.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-07-18" status="stub"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-07-21" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-09-01" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Shaun McCance</name>
+      <email>shaunm@gnome.org</email>
+    </credit>
     <copyright>
       <year>2009</year>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -20,78 +25,45 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
   </info>
 
-  <title>Status icons</title>
+  <title>Status Types and Icons</title>
 
-  <table frame="all" rules="cols" shade="rows">
-    <thead>
-      <tr>
-        <td>
-          <p>
-            Icon
-          </p>
-        </td>
-        <td>
-          <p>
-            Description
-          </p>
-        </td>
-      </tr>
-    </thead>
-    <tbody>
-    <tr>
-      <td>
-        <p>
-        <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/available.png">
-          Available icon
-        </media>
-        </p>
-      </td>
-      <td>
-        <p>
-          This is the default icon for the <em>Available</em> status.
-        </p>
-        <p>
-          Use this icon when you are availble to have conversations with other
-          people.
-        </p>
-      </td>
-    </tr>
-    <tr>
-      <td>
-        <p>
-        <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/busy.png">
-          Busy icon
-        </media>
-        </p>
-      </td>
-      <td>
-        <p>
-          This is the default icon for the <em>Busy</em> status.
-        </p>
-        <p>
-          Use this icon when you do not want to be disturbed.
-        </p>
-      </td>
-    </tr>
-    <tr>
-      <td>
-        <p>
-        <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/away.png">
-          Away icon
-        </media>
-        </p>
-      </td>
-      <td>
-        <p>
-          This is the default icon for the <em>Away</em> status.
-        </p>
-        <p>
-          Use this icon when you are going away from the computer. This icon
-          is used also when you leave the computer and the screensaver turns on.
-        </p>
-      </td>
-    </tr>
-    </tbody>
-  </table>
+  <terms>
+    <item>
+      <title><media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/available.png">Available icon</media>
+      <gui>Available</gui></title>
+      <p>Use the <em>Available</em> status when you are at your computer and able
+      to chat with your contacts.  You can set a custom message for this status.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <title><media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/busy.png">Busy icon</media>
+      <gui>Busy</gui></title>
+      <p>Use the <em>Busy</em> status to let your contacts know that you don’t want
+      to chat right now.  They can still contact you, for instance if they have something
+      urgent they need to discuss.  By default, <app>Empathy</app> will not use notification
+      bubbles and sounds when you are busy.  You can set a custom message for this status.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <title><media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/away.png">Away icon</media>
+      <gui>Away</gui></title>
+      <p>Use the <em>Away</em> status when you are going away from your computer.
+      <app>Empathy</app> automatically sets your status to Away if you do not use
+      your computer for a while, or if your screensaver is on.  By default,
+      <app>Empathy</app> will not use notification bubbles and sounds when you are
+      away.  You can set a custom message for this status.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <title><media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/offline.png">Offline icon</media>
+      <gui>Hidden</gui></title>
+      <p>When you set your status to <em>Hidden</em>, you will appear as offline
+      to your contacts.  You will still be connected to your accounts, and you
+      still see your contacts’ statuses and start conversations with them.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <title><media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/offline.png">Offline icon</media>
+      <gui>Offline</gui></title>
+      <p>Setting your status to <em>Offline</em> disconnects you from all of
+      your accounts.</p>
+    </item>
+  </terms>
 
 </page>