[help] More reviews and updates for account management topics

1 files changed, 23 insertions, 39 deletions

diff --git a/help/C/remove-account.page b/help/C/remove-account.page
index dda83517c..fa53607db 100644
--- a/help/C/remove-account.page
+++ b/help/C/remove-account.page
@@ -1,13 +1,16 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="remove-account">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="remove-account">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#accounts"/>
     <desc>Completely remove an account from <app>Empathy</app>.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-14" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-10" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.3" date="2009-08-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.3" date="2009-08-27" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
@@ -21,51 +24,32 @@
 
   <title>Remove an account</title>
 
-  <p>
-    Removing an account means to delete it from your computer with all
-    the conversations you had with other people.
-  </p>
-  <p>
-    After removing an account you will not be able to recover it or to recover
-     the conversations you had.
-  </p>
-
+  <p>You can completely remove an account from <app>Empathy</app> if you no
+  longer wish to use the account.  If you wish to use the account in
+  <app>Empathy</app> again in the future, you will have to add your account
+  details again.</p>
+  
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        From the <gui>Contact List</gui> window, perform one of the following:
-      </p>
-      <list>
-        <item>
-          <p>
-            Press <key>F4</key>.
-          </p>
-        </item>
-        <item>
-          <p>
-            Choose <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Accounts</gui></guiseq>.
-          </p>
-        </item>
-      </list>
+      <p>From the <gui>Contact List</gui> window, choose <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui>
+      <gui>Accounts</gui></guiseq>, or press <key>F4</key>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        Select the account you wish to remove from the box on the
-         left of the dialog.
-      </p>
+      <p>Select the account you wish to remove from the accounts list on the
+      left side of the window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        Click on the trash icon to remove the account.
-      </p>
+      <p>Click on the trash icon next to the account name to remove the account.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        A dialog will be shown asking for confirmation. Click on
-        the <gui>Remove</gui> button to permanently remove the
-        account.
-      </p>
+      <p>A dialog will be shown asking for confirmation. Click the <gui>Remove</gui>
+      button to permanently remove the account.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <note>
+    <p>Even after removing an account, <app>Empathy</app> does not delete
+    your conversation history for that account.</p>
+  </note>
+
 </page>