[help]

irc-nick-password:
 * wordings
 * added a note
irc-start-conversation:
 * added topic for starting a private IRC conversation
irc-send-file:
 * added topic for sending files via IRC (it's not possible)
start-conversation:
 * added topic describing the Ctrl+N way to start a conversation
prob-conn-neterror:
 * reworked the page adding the IRC problem
prob-conn-name:
 * reworked the page
prob-conn-acctdisabled:
 * reworked the page
audio-video:
 * added a note
 * added table for supported services/protocols
Makefile.am:
 * added new pages

1 files changed, 45 insertions, 38 deletions

diff --git a/help/C/prob-conn-neterror.page b/help/C/prob-conn-neterror.page
index f15a4c86c..8001ed49b 100644
--- a/help/C/prob-conn-neterror.page
+++ b/help/C/prob-conn-neterror.page
@@ -6,14 +6,18 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="prob-conn"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="irc-manage#problems" />
     <desc>
-        An error message appears in the main <app>Empathy</app> window which says
-        "Network error".
+        An error message which says "<gui>Network error</gui>" appears in the main window.
     </desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-17" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
+      <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
+    </credit>
     <copyright>
       <year>2009</year>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -21,47 +25,50 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
   </info>
 
-<!--
-  TODO: rework this page in order to talk about the IRC problem: if you
-  don't set your nickname, this is the kind of error that will be shown.
- -->
-
-<title>I get a message that says "Network error"</title>
+  <title>I get a message that says "Network error"</title>
 
-<p>
-If you try to connect and an error message appears in the main Empathy
-window which says "Network error", Empathy cannot communicate with
-the instant messaging service for some reason.
-</p>
+  <p>
+    This kind of error happens when <app>Empathy</app> cannot communicate
+    with the instant messaging service for some reason.
+  </p>
+  <p>
+    Also, this kind of error happens when you try to use an IRC account without
+    setting a nickname.
+  </p>
 
-<list>
-<item>
-    <p>
-    Check that you are connected to the Internet or network.
-    </p>
-</item>
-<item>
-    <steps>
-        <item>
-        <p>
-        Click the <gui>Edit Account</gui> button in the error message.
-        </p>
-        </item>
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>
+        Make sure that you are connected to the Internet, or to a local area network. 
+      </p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>
+        Click on the <gui>Edit Account</gui> button in the error message.
+      </p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <list>
         <item>
-        <p>
-        Expand the <gui>Advanced</gui> section and make sure that the details
-        such as server address and port are correct. You should be able to find
-        these details from the website of the messaging service.
-        </p>
+          <p>
+            Check in the <gui>Advanced</gui> section that all the details are correct.
+            You should be able to find these details from the website of the messaging service.
+          </p>
         </item>
         <item>
-        <p>
-        Uncheck the <gui>Enabled</gui> box next to the name of your account and
-        then check it again to try to connect to the service again.
-        </p>
+          <p>
+            In the case of an IRC account, type your nickname in the <gui>Nickname</gui>
+            text box.
+          </p>
         </item>
-    </steps>
-</item>
-</list>
+      </list>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>
+        Deselect the <gui>Enabled</gui> check-box next to the name of your account, 
+        and then select it again to try to reconnect to the service.
+      </p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
 
 </page>