[help] Reworked two topics, added a new one

 * introduction: some wordings
 * group-conversations: moved from advanced to text conversations section
   reworked the topic
 * prev-conv: added stub topic for searching previous conversations

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 8305fab29..58311b17b 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-16" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-17" status="review"/>
     <desc>
       Introduction to the <app>Empathy</app> instant messenger.
     </desc>
@@ -23,22 +24,22 @@
 
   <p>
     <app>Empathy</app> is an instant messaging application for the GNOME Desktop.
-    It supports text messaging, voice &amp; video call even using SIP, 
-    file transfers and all the most used messaging systems such as MSN and Google Talk.
+    It supports text messaging, voice &amp; video call, file transfers and all the
+    most used messaging systems such as MSN and Google Talk.
   </p>
   <p>
     <app>Empathy</app> includes features that help you better collaborate while at work,
     and that let you easily keep in touch with your friends.  
   </p>
   <p>
-    You can group all the conversations on a single window, or have multiple windows for
+    You can group all the conversations in a single window, or have multiple windows for
     different kind of conversations; easily search through your previous conversations, and
     share your desktop in just two clicks.
   </p>
 
   <p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/empathy-main-window.png" mime="image/png">
-      <app>Empathy</app> main window
+      <app>Empathy</app> main window.
     </media>
   </p>