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| author | Shaun McCance <shaunm@gnome.org> | 2010-04-26 22:54:32 +0800 |
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| committer | Shaun McCance <shaunm@gnome.org> | 2010-04-26 22:54:32 +0800 |
| commit | 81083111d84e63d44f868bb656482e16d70859d9 (patch) | |
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| parent | 36cfeec5f9c5746a4b79cc36e44a96777621eaa0 (diff) | |
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[help] Minor language tweaks to updated content
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diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page index 19232e806..404172a32 100644 --- a/help/C/create-account.page +++ b/help/C/create-account.page @@ -45,12 +45,11 @@ <section id="facebook"> <title>Facebook</title> <p> - Facebook is one of the most used social network. It provides users with - the opportunity to create their own profile, and to communicate with their - friends. + Facebook is one of the most-used social networks. It allows users to + create their own profile and to communicate with their friends. </p> <p> - In order to use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need + To use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need to create a new account from the website: <link href="http://www.facebook.com">www.facebook.com</link>. </p> |