[help] More reviews and updates for account management topics

1 files changed, 14 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/help/C/add-contact.page b/help/C/add-contact.page
index 14d49a57a..11e11f619 100644
--- a/help/C/add-contact.page
+++ b/help/C/add-contact.page
@@ -1,13 +1,16 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="add-contact">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="add-contact">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#accounts"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="offline-contacts"/>
     <desc>Add someone to the contact list.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-15" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-10" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
@@ -23,27 +26,20 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        Choose <guiseq><gui>Chat</gui><gui>Add Contact</gui></guiseq>.
-      </p>
+      <p>Choose <guiseq><gui>Chat</gui><gui>Add Contact</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        From the <gui>Account</gui> drop-down list, select the type of
-        service the person you want to add to your contacts is using.
-      </p>
+      <p>From the <gui>Account</gui> drop-down list, select the account you wish
+      to use to connect to your contact.  Your contact will need to be using the
+      same service as the account you select.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        In the <gui>Identifier</gui> text box, type the email address
-        or the username of the person you want to add to your
-        contacts list.
-      </p>
+      <p>In the <gui>Identifier</gui> field, enter your contact’s login ID, username,
+      screen name, or other appropriate identifier for the service type.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        In the <gui>Alias</gui> text box, type their name.
-      </p>
+      <p>In the <gui>Alias</gui> field, type your contact’s name as you would like
+      it to appear in your contact list.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>