* wrote share-desktop * rewrote set-custom-status * some rewrote here and there, mostly small fixes

1 files changed, 14 insertions, 20 deletions

diff --git a/help/C/add-contact.page b/help/C/add-contact.page
index 529ec07da..0227c17ab 100644
--- a/help/C/add-contact.page
+++ b/help/C/add-contact.page
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#accounts"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="offline-contacts"/>
     <desc>Add someone to the contact list.</desc>
-    <revision version="3.0" date="2009-06-15" status="draft"/>
-    
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-15" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-10" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
@@ -16,10 +16,9 @@
       <year>2009</year>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
     </copyright>
-    
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
-  
+
   <comment>
     <cite date="2009-06-15"><name>Phil Bull</name></cite>
     <p>Instructions need review, didn't test with other IM services to confirm 
@@ -27,48 +26,43 @@
   </comment>
 
   <title>Add someone to your list of contacts</title>
-  
+
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>
-	Choose <guiseq><gui>Chat</gui><gui>Add Contact</gui></guiseq>
+        Choose <guiseq><gui>Chat</gui><gui>Add Contact</gui></guiseq>.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-	From the <gui>Account</gui> drop-down list, select the type of
-	service the person you want to add to your contacts is using.
+        From the <gui>Account</gui> drop-down list, select the type of
+         service the person you want to add to your contacts is using.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-	In the <gui>Identifier</gui> text box, type the email address
-	or the username of the person you want to add to your
-	contacts list.
+        In the <gui>Identifier</gui> text box, type the email address
+         or the username of the person you want to add to your
+         contacts list.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-	In the <gui>Alias</gui> text box, type their name.
+        In the <gui>Alias</gui> text box, type their name.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-	Click <gui>Add</gui> to add the person to your list of
-	contacts.
+        Click <gui>Add</gui> to add the person to your list of
+         contacts.
       </p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>
-    You can view your list of contacts in the main window of
-    <app>Empathy</app>.
-  </p>
-
   <note>
     <p>
       To add a new person to your list of contacts, you need to be
-      connected to the Internet and to your account.
+       connected to the Internet and to your account.
     </p>
   </note>